lost in faith

lost in faith

dear Human,

you would never know who I am

as I am only an imagination

only a figure in your dreams

in your fantasies

but for you are my creator, i would always be a real friend for you,,

whether you could feel me or not,

i always feel you..

sincerely, your alter Ego

dear Dream,

how could i ever get in touch with you?

coz i need some escape

from this brutality of my life

from all these fears that i feel

for all the doubts that become real?

Love, Your reality

dear Human,

i will always tease you

attract you for always make through

leaving even your slightest hesitations

and there will never any inhibitions

for your ways are guide by an angel

come to me and you will never surrender

sincerely, Your alter ego

dear Dream,

there is white flag above my head

there is white flag within my mind

i would come completely to you

just tell me how i can make you become true?

Love, your Reality

i can’t even tell which one is true

for all I need is only you

written for JP Poetry Potluck Today



25 Comments

Great layout which is perfect for your theme. I like the final stanza being centered too. Liked it!
Here from Poetry Potluck.

http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/05/01/darkly-imagined/

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thank you Jessica,,
it just expresses my twisted mind right now,,
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Great conversation between self and alter ego. I agree with Jessica. It’s great that they are combined in the final stanza.

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it is really happen to me in many times,,
thanks for reading it!
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lovely,
glad to see you come in,
superb new blog template, wow.

A++

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A beautiful piece… thank you for taking the time to stop by and read my poetry. Sincerely apprecaite it.

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thank you for coming here,,
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this is wonderful! i love the dialoge and the depth

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glad u love this,,
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wonderful exchange of thoughts! so creative of you 🙂

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Interesting format AND dialogue – very thought provoking!

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i hope u’re not provoked,,
lol

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Masih ingatkah dgn nickname ini? Hehe..
I like the way u hate me hehe..
Come to my wedding yach..

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hahahaa,,
hi im!
what date is that?
hope i could make it,,
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love your sweet soul, wow.
you made it to poetry potluck…
keep it up.

How are you?
Please consider making a contribution to poets rally week 43 today,
A free verse is appreciated, you rock!

See you soon.
Happy Thursday!
xoxox

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love your sweet soul, wow.
you made it to poetry potluck…
keep it up.

How are you?
Please consider making a contribution to poets rally week 43 today,
A free verse is appreciated, you rock!

See you soon.
Happy Thursday!
xoxox
😉

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thanks Jingle!
u are a sweet soul also,,

i hope I could make it,, 🙂

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Loved the layout, as mentioned, it fit your words and theme perfectly and the words were wonderful, nicely done!

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thank you,,
thanks for coming,,
it means a lot, really,,
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Such an innovative poem, uniques and filled with longing and wisdom. Your layout is clever but the message is what makes it work. This is my first visit to your blog and I lke the poems I have read so far! Keep writing, you have much to offer. Hugs, pat

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hi Pat!
thanks for your visit
glad that u enjoy my work.
it means a lot to me.
hugs, TDJ…

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