~P.a.P.a.R.a.Z.z.i~

~P.a.P.a.R.a.Z.z.i~

burned!

i’m dead,,

for all the lights,,

of all the lights,,

thank you!

now, if you would,,

please,,

catch me if you can,,

now that i’m dead,,

of all the lights,,

written especially for Thursday Poets Rally Week 43.

it is awarded by Jingle!


thanks Jingle and promising poets’ caffe,,




48 Comments

So short but hard hitting! Excellent work!

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such emotion delivered in such short words! good job!

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Right on the face ! Wonderfully done !

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🙂
thanks for the compliment,,

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Wow…that leaves nothing for me to say..

Pretty nice work of brain there.

Alcina

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thanks,,
i can’t believe i’ve write that!
lol
🙂

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Blinding death. Great piece. Kudos!

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This makes me think of someone who has fallen from the grace of recognition. Once chased after, then loss of fame or whatever, no longer being sought by the paparazzi.

I can’t imagine what it’s like having all those camera’s and lights going off in your face, being blind, yikes.

I enjoyed your offering. Thank you for stopping by my blog.

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yeah,,
this poem is inspired by many story about stars and paparazzi.
thanks for coming back here
🙂

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Short and wonderfully thought provoking. A multi-layed piece. Well crafted.

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elegant one.
love the compactness.

Happy Mother’s Day to Moms around you. Blessings..

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hi J!
thanks for coming,,
i enjoyed the rally much.

happy mother’s day too

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Almost a relief to be dead for the lights.. Some deep feelings lie in these lines..

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for the lights and of the lights
🙂

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A clear message to them: “catch me if you can”… Well said!

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lots of meaning in between the lines, wonderful work..

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What’s the use/meaning of the double comma? Not sure I follow your meaning.

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hi!
i won’t make it fully stop, it implies that something had to be done after the sentence, another thought to be said, but it just can’t.
🙂

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this reminds me of princess diana.. ..

great write..

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haha,,
you got it right!
🙂

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Nicely written, i love the shortness of it and factual truth of death.

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thanks,,
thank you for coming here,,

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Wow, chilling and mysterious

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whoops.. thanks! 🙂

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Short, sweet, catchy and interesting. Forgive me for thinking about that earworm Lady Gaga song at the title! ^_^

queen

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Interesting stuff to think about here. Nice job!

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Hello,
Appreciate your participation at poets rally,
Please return favor to poets who are here yet you did not reach them initially,
Bless your day.
Have fun!

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quite an interesting poem….like it a lot 🙂

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glad that you like it,,
🙂

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A very slick and sharp write!

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